First Thoughts

I keep thinking about my project 3, and I'm pretty sure my next movie will be to restructure my paper so that the personal narrative I used is still subtle but is able to stand out and affect the reader. I think I have some good ideas for my paper, but I'm having trouble communicating them cohesively, since I am more accustomed to writing thesis driven papers or following a clear story arc. I have to establish my argument about how I feel about "my place" so that I can support it and make my paper effective.